http://Emma Anderson/ ([identity profile] emma anderson) wrote in [community profile] trennels 2014-10-08 12:12 pm (UTC)

Re: peter/malise - foley

I certainly think the references were deliberate to tie into Patrick's later actions, and it seems evident on re-reading that Patrick had been about to say something about Malise Marlow - in terms of, "you do know what he was actually like, don't you", sort of thing - but he's interrupted. Which makes Peter's reaction to the eventual reveal so much stronger, because he's invested so much in his character by then.

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