ext_306163 ([identity profile] intrepid--fox.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] trennels 2014-11-27 06:05 pm (UTC)

Mr Tranter

When Nicola is out at the pigsties telling Rowan about Kay's unexpected arrival home, Rowan mentions that Mr Tranter hasn't been feeling well. It's a neat bit of foreshadowing, but would he really have felt unwell before suffering a stroke? I thought they were sudden catastrophic events.

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