http://elainerees.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elainerees.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] trennels2011-02-22 04:00 pm
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Younger Marlows

I think I have just put some writing in my journal, but very much a novice and apologise if I'm doing this all wrong!

[identity profile] ankaret.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Great username, and I look forward to reading the fic!

[identity profile] rosathome.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely! It's always a treat to find new Marlow fic and I love the insight into the older ones when they were younger.

[identity profile] the_antichris.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
New fic! I can't wait to read it.

(Anonymous) 2011-02-25 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
This is good - please do carry on with it!

[identity profile] this-other-life.livejournal.com 2011-02-28 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that was so good. I do hope you have it mind to write some more.

[identity profile] this-other-life.livejournal.com 2011-03-03 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh very enjoyable. I'm greedily awaiting the next installment. Poor Karen. Never my favourite Marlow but you are making me feel sorry for her.

(Anonymous) 2011-03-04 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Please do carry on with this, enjoying it very much so far!

Re: Banished men??

(Anonymous) 2011-03-13 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
My first thought was Shakespeare - googled and found a number of references, - possibly King Lear? This is from an article about the play -

"I also liked the violent, urban setting. Regan and Cornwall order Gloucester's castle "shut up" against Lear. The stage directions tell us that the banished men wander on a "heath"--a natural place. Nature is a major motif in the play, always opposed to artifice. Several characters wrestle with whether nature is just or cruel. But the word "heath" is never spoken on stage, so it is a legitimate idea to make that barren place into nighttime streets, populated by the poor, the naked, and the crazy. When Edgar, Gloucester, and Lear are cast out, they become homeless--just like the homeless men in our cities."

Re: Banished men??

(Anonymous) 2011-03-16 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
It is the same ballad as the weep end knife one:

THERE were three ladies lived in a bower,
Refrain: Eh vow bonnie
And they went out to pull a flower.
Refrain: On the bonnie banks o Fordie

They hadna pu'ed a flower but ane,
When up started to them a banisht man.

He's taen the first sister by her hand,
And he's turned her round and made her stand.

"It's whether will ye be a rank robber's wife,
Or will ye die by my wee pen-knife?"

"It's I'll not be a rank robber's wife,
But I'll rather die by your wee pen-knife."

He's killed this may, and he's laid her by,
For to bear the red rose company.

He's taken the second ane by the hand,
And he's turned her round and made her stand.

"It's whether will ye be a rank robber's wife,
Or will ye die by my wee pen-knife?"

"I'll not be a rank robber's wife,
But I'll rather die by your wee pen-knife."

He's killed this may, and he's laid her by,
For to bear the red rose company.

He's taken the youngest ane by the hand,
And he's turned her round and made her stand.

Says, "Will ye be a rank robber's wife,
Or will ye die by my wee pen-knife?"

"I'll not be a rank robber's wife,
Nor will I die by your wee pen-knife.

"For I hae a brother in this wood,
And gin ye kill me, it's he'll kill thee."

"What's thy brother's name? come tell to me."
"My brother's name is Baby Lon."

"O sister, sister, what have I done!
O have I done this ill to thee!

"O since I've done this evil deed,
Good sall never be seen o me."

He's taken out his wee pen-knife,
And he's twyned himsel o his ain sweet life.

[identity profile] catwithcreamy.livejournal.com 2011-03-17 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Marvellous! Do keep going, please. I'm dying to hear all about Small Miranda eyes a-goggle at Janice et al.

Благодарю за блог

[identity profile] krishnaonyd.livejournal.com 2011-06-04 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Это прям в точку!!! Другими словами и не скажешь! :)Image (http://site-sex-znakomstva.ru/)

Younger Marlows

(Anonymous) 2011-10-31 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this is brilliant. You have captured AF's style perfectly. Can't wait to read more.

[identity profile] wrendunil.livejournal.com 2012-02-09 09:17 am (UTC)(link)
Отлично! Все бы так писали :)Image (http://zimnyayaobuv.ru/)Image (http://zimnyaya-obuv.ru/)

[identity profile] ivohenry.livejournal.com 2013-05-31 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Would be great if you could get back to this, love to read more!