Ankaret ([identity profile] ankaret.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] trennels2005-12-20 02:41 am
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AF fanfic

I've written a vaguely seasonal complete Marlow story here. Contains (a) theology, (b) Miss Keith, and (c) Ann's POV - you have been warned. :)

[identity profile] blonde222.livejournal.com 2005-12-20 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
it's fab! I think in particular you've done the voice of Patrick very well: he is totally seamless from the original.

And I also approve of the Ann POV: on one hand it's a very un-Forest thing to have written, but I think it's about time someone gave her a proper personality.

[identity profile] richenda.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked this very much, especially the Ann/Patrick talk. I don't think that Nicola would really have much to worry about - or did you mean her to have? I thought not, because Ann isn't hawkish or horsey enough to be a real threat .....
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