AF fanfic

[ankaret.livejournal.com]

I've written a vaguely seasonal complete Marlow story here. Contains (a) theology, (b) Miss Keith, and (c) Ann's POV - you have been warned. :)

Comments

[blonde222.livejournal.com]

it's fab! I think in particular you've done the voice of Patrick very well: he is totally seamless from the original.

And I also approve of the Ann POV: on one hand it's a very un-Forest thing to have written, but I think it's about time someone gave her a proper personality.

[ankaret.livejournal.com]

I've been trying to think whether there's an Ann POV scene anywhere in the canon, and I can't think of one. Though that doesn't mean it isn't there staring everyone in the face like the scene where two men do have a conversation with no women around in Jane Austen.