it's fab! I think in particular you've done the voice of Patrick very well: he is totally seamless from the original.
And I also approve of the Ann POV: on one hand it's a very un-Forest thing to have written, but I think it's about time someone gave her a proper personality.
I liked this very much, especially the Ann/Patrick talk. I don't think that Nicola would really have much to worry about - or did you mean her to have? I thought not, because Ann isn't hawkish or horsey enough to be a real threat ..... Wrenby Canonicorum is CLEVER!
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Date: 2005-12-20 09:54 pm (UTC)And I also approve of the Ann POV: on one hand it's a very un-Forest thing to have written, but I think it's about time someone gave her a proper personality.
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Date: 2005-12-23 03:25 pm (UTC)Wrenby Canonicorum is CLEVER!
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